From a53a6b6fefc5ffc3a9b085ed0c2567928f4d5225 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tobias Geerinckx-Rice Date: Wed, 29 Mar 2017 17:45:50 +0200 Subject: gnu: hyperrogue: Improve description. * gnu/packages/games.scm (hyperrogue)[description]: Mainly fix a typo. Throw in a few tweaks as well. --- gnu/packages/games.scm | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/gnu/packages/games.scm b/gnu/packages/games.scm index 19f9c9d396..0dcb15f32b 100644 --- a/gnu/packages/games.scm +++ b/gnu/packages/games.scm @@ -3266,10 +3266,11 @@ (define-public hyperrogue plane and not in euclidean space. In HyperRogue, the player can move through different parts of the world, which -are home to particular creatures and may be subject to own rules of \"physics\". +are home to particular creatures and may be subject to their own rules of +\"physics\". -While it can use ASCII characters to display the world the classical rogue -symbols, the game needs graphics to render the non-euclidean world.") +While the game can use ASCII characters to display the the classical rogue +symbols, it still needs graphics to render the non-euclidean world.") (license (list license:bsd-3 ; glew.c, mtrand.* license:cc-by-sa3.0 ; music license:cc-by-sa4.0 ; sounds -- cgit v1.2.3